tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1383123748110186741.post2471654454335026987..comments2024-03-07T08:24:36.070-06:00Comments on The Writing Life of Melanie Cole: Five Sentence Fiction Friday - RingingMelanie Colehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06677477295913962657noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1383123748110186741.post-19059325158992220942013-01-30T11:15:04.812-06:002013-01-30T11:15:04.812-06:00One of the better entries this week. I really want...One of the better entries this week. I really want to know what happened and how it will play out. Steve Hustedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15706578064893195132noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1383123748110186741.post-24765679082566404112013-01-28T15:56:22.998-06:002013-01-28T15:56:22.998-06:00This is brilliant. The sinister bell bringing reve...This is brilliant. The sinister bell bringing revenge on that poor town. I wonder what he did to them. . . very well written creating atmosphere in very few words. xAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09547723072723614894noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1383123748110186741.post-65791615638950958922013-01-27T12:28:38.776-06:002013-01-27T12:28:38.776-06:00Reminiscent of The Lottery. Very well executed.Reminiscent of The Lottery. Very well executed.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1383123748110186741.post-90252748322426248472013-01-26T22:33:57.397-06:002013-01-26T22:33:57.397-06:00This made me shudder, one could feel the potential...This made me shudder, one could feel the potential for it to become real.Josie Two Shoeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18388032819905416258noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1383123748110186741.post-13107691047768382642013-01-25T22:36:59.282-06:002013-01-25T22:36:59.282-06:00You could make an entire novel out of this. I migh...You could make an entire novel out of this. I might have used a semi-colon instead of a comma in the last sentence, but it doesn't detract from the story. I like it!K R Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04759225924353249792noreply@blogger.com