tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1383123748110186741.post2960211077586779564..comments2024-03-07T08:24:36.070-06:00Comments on The Writing Life of Melanie Cole: Five Sentence Fiction Friday - AwkwardMelanie Colehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06677477295913962657noreply@blogger.comBlogger15125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1383123748110186741.post-70353861442247654302012-09-18T21:09:44.428-06:002012-09-18T21:09:44.428-06:00Yikes! You've really captured the moment perfe...Yikes! You've really captured the moment perfectly in these tight sentences. Nice work!!!Lillie McFerrinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05367116687588265202noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1383123748110186741.post-42714762416050036712012-09-17T22:49:09.768-06:002012-09-17T22:49:09.768-06:00Oh, ouch. Such a painful moment, beautifully captu...Oh, ouch. Such a painful moment, beautifully captured.Kern Windwraithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16771591425163484238noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1383123748110186741.post-87750237716265260722012-09-17T10:59:37.234-06:002012-09-17T10:59:37.234-06:00There's something about embarrassment that hit...There's something about embarrassment that hits home with all of us. I think everyone's been on at least one side of that scenario at some point in their lives, and they probably won't ever forget it! Thank you all so much for chiming in!Melanie Colehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06677477295913962657noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1383123748110186741.post-88346192007162486552012-09-17T02:54:42.443-06:002012-09-17T02:54:42.443-06:00Five delightfully short sentences that paint such ...Five delightfully short sentences that paint such a vivid picture.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1383123748110186741.post-59547232765831926262012-09-16T12:30:59.820-06:002012-09-16T12:30:59.820-06:00A truly horrible moment in anyone's life! Very...A truly horrible moment in anyone's life! Very well written!Lisa Shambrookhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12767127776898278402noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1383123748110186741.post-5519962113232029162012-09-16T03:00:19.407-06:002012-09-16T03:00:19.407-06:00One word - BUSTED!
Great job Melanie!One word - BUSTED!<br />Great job Melanie!michellehttp://writer-in-transit.co.za/f-s-f-awkward/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1383123748110186741.post-13541000742152162832012-09-15T20:18:26.194-06:002012-09-15T20:18:26.194-06:00Welcome! I'll be sure to check out your blog!Welcome! I'll be sure to check out your blog!Melanie Colehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06677477295913962657noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1383123748110186741.post-22863311615127065032012-09-15T20:18:04.369-06:002012-09-15T20:18:04.369-06:00Thank you all so much! Your comments are so though...Thank you all so much! Your comments are so thoughtful. I really appreciate it! Melanie Colehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06677477295913962657noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1383123748110186741.post-33075531125268854952012-09-15T19:25:40.852-06:002012-09-15T19:25:40.852-06:00I loved this. Well done. I'm new here...
http:...I loved this. Well done. I'm new here...<br />http://mcguffysreader.blogspot.com/2012/09/the-loan.htmlAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1383123748110186741.post-70627444587994593832012-09-15T04:45:14.700-06:002012-09-15T04:45:14.700-06:00I could identify with both sides here having been ...I could identify with both sides here having been there - truly awkward. Great job.Sarahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04402703967636964187noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1383123748110186741.post-85805728192224374702012-09-14T21:53:07.094-06:002012-09-14T21:53:07.094-06:00Very nicely written. How many times have we all be...Very nicely written. How many times have we all been there, done that, and how we have shifted from foot to foot and thought, "Awkward." Got me into the moment. Nice job. RandyAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1383123748110186741.post-79496697823556315602012-09-14T14:56:07.133-06:002012-09-14T14:56:07.133-06:00Doesn't matter what they said or did, you capt...Doesn't matter what they said or did, you captured the moment very nicely.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1383123748110186741.post-74628468277640352332012-09-14T12:20:24.248-06:002012-09-14T12:20:24.248-06:00Short but packed full of emotion, nice work :)Short but packed full of emotion, nice work :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00971686377049763453noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1383123748110186741.post-85474168256286532322012-09-14T10:30:10.418-06:002012-09-14T10:30:10.418-06:00Thanks!Thanks!Melanie Colehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06677477295913962657noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1383123748110186741.post-63265541547120735202012-09-14T10:04:27.039-06:002012-09-14T10:04:27.039-06:00Succinct but you paint the picture perfectly. Nice...Succinct but you paint the picture perfectly. Nice work!Andrew Swinglerhttp://www.tospeakperchance.comnoreply@blogger.com