tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1383123748110186741.post4545557690739044099..comments2024-03-07T08:24:36.070-06:00Comments on The Writing Life of Melanie Cole: Five Sentence Fiction Friday - CharacterMelanie Colehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06677477295913962657noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1383123748110186741.post-10243674469879869032012-11-11T21:09:58.581-06:002012-11-11T21:09:58.581-06:00Very nice writing Melanie...Very nice writing Melanie...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1383123748110186741.post-5693836040461265592012-11-11T17:39:46.232-06:002012-11-11T17:39:46.232-06:00Great description...and ending. I'd love to se...Great description...and ending. I'd love to see where this might go.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1383123748110186741.post-31343529809250282082012-11-11T02:56:18.563-06:002012-11-11T02:56:18.563-06:00This was well paced with an astounding finish. Wel...This was well paced with an astounding finish. Well done.ninotazizhttp://www.poemsbyninotaziz.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1383123748110186741.post-47299622229404789892012-11-10T16:49:16.630-06:002012-11-10T16:49:16.630-06:00Very poignant piece Melanie, really lovely.Very poignant piece Melanie, really lovely.Lisa Shambrookhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12767127776898278402noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1383123748110186741.post-10949768117536454782012-11-10T06:05:25.098-06:002012-11-10T06:05:25.098-06:00Just as I was getting into this it was over - whic...Just as I was getting into this it was over - which only goes to show how good a piece of writing and character description it is. Kudos :)Mark Khttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13002166292175980928noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1383123748110186741.post-63548095023145895672012-11-09T18:35:19.818-06:002012-11-09T18:35:19.818-06:00I like this a lot. Beautifully descriptive. I co...I like this a lot. Beautifully descriptive. I could so easily picture this character. So many ways we can take the ending, too. Very nicely done.injaynesworldhttp://injaynesworld.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1383123748110186741.post-56389522354146627152012-11-09T16:12:31.916-06:002012-11-09T16:12:31.916-06:00Love the descriptions and the surreal ending.
Rem...Love the descriptions and the surreal ending.<br /><br />Remember, solipsism is its own reward.<br /><br />Cheers!<br />JzBJazzbumpahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07337490817307473659noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1383123748110186741.post-8165212490260607002012-11-09T10:40:52.436-06:002012-11-09T10:40:52.436-06:00Powerful evocation, and sensitive take on the prom...Powerful evocation, and sensitive take on the prompt, beautiful writing :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com