tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1383123748110186741.post8038903677906594622..comments2024-03-07T08:24:36.070-06:00Comments on The Writing Life of Melanie Cole: Five Sentence Fiction Friday - PiratesMelanie Colehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06677477295913962657noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1383123748110186741.post-73992595926749518632012-07-12T09:34:03.228-06:002012-07-12T09:34:03.228-06:00What a lovely take on the prompt. I can imagine a...What a lovely take on the prompt. I can imagine a brave child hiding on the stairway to watch the action...dreaming of such adventures herself!Britton Minorhttp://www.thejadedlens.com/2012/07/11noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1383123748110186741.post-58464629243146208752012-07-12T00:26:39.928-06:002012-07-12T00:26:39.928-06:00Ghost pirates!! I love it!! Spooky and fun at the ...Ghost pirates!! I love it!! Spooky and fun at the same time!!:)Bullishhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05343416717330536392noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1383123748110186741.post-53029828660028206122012-07-10T15:46:20.770-06:002012-07-10T15:46:20.770-06:00Thanks everyone!! I really enjoyed this one. It wa...Thanks everyone!! I really enjoyed this one. It was such a great prompt from Lillie McFerrin, as soon as I saw the word the wheels started turning. Thank you so much for all of your comments and praise! Very much appreciated!!Melanie Colehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06677477295913962657noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1383123748110186741.post-6039848690549912642012-07-10T12:28:46.354-06:002012-07-10T12:28:46.354-06:00Like JT said this could be a metaphor for so many ...Like JT said this could be a metaphor for so many things, or just fantasy! I saw children in bed whilst an adult party goes on downstairs, then I reread it and saw pure fantasy!Lisa Shambrookhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12767127776898278402noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1383123748110186741.post-20209658105919844222012-07-10T09:17:25.481-06:002012-07-10T09:17:25.481-06:00What an enjoyable story.
I shivered along with the...What an enjoyable story.<br />I shivered along with the occupants of the house as I read it.<br />I'd be well gone before the next full moon!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1383123748110186741.post-57861128941923273742012-07-10T08:18:57.854-06:002012-07-10T08:18:57.854-06:00What a creative response to the prompt. I like th...What a creative response to the prompt. I like the idea of the monthly invasion waves ship and all!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1383123748110186741.post-47668773165462863162012-07-09T21:31:33.548-06:002012-07-09T21:31:33.548-06:00Wonderful... it works on many different levels, no...Wonderful... it works on many different levels, not the least of which is a trip back to the simultaneous thrills & terrors of childhood fears.JTsuruokahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05173187123835069767noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1383123748110186741.post-73501114642394925702012-07-09T16:59:43.556-06:002012-07-09T16:59:43.556-06:00Nicely done! Reminded me a bit of Jumanji (though ...Nicely done! Reminded me a bit of Jumanji (though I don't mean that as a slight in any way) - but its like the house becomes an imaginative portal through which this whole other world can be seen. I liked it.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com