Welcome to Five Sentence Fiction Friday! This week's prompt is wisdom. If you'd like to learn more about Five Sentence Fiction, just visit Lillie McFerrin Writes. Enjoy!
The snake warned me not to do it.
"What good is wisdom anyway? Stay here, in the garden, in paradise."
He made an appealing argument to my simple mind, but there was a pull inside, a need for freedom, a tingling of curiosity for that big red apple that was impossible to ignore.
My children often ask if I regret it, but I just look at the spark of intelligence in their eyes, smile and shake my head no.
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Wow fun twist on the classic tale!
ReplyDeleteBlessed guilt, that brought so much delights and despairs with Humankind into the world!
ReplyDeleteNicely written!
Thank you.
Od Liam
Well done with this very imaginative twist!
ReplyDeleteMaybe the snake was using a little reverse psychology... either way, an interesting story!
ReplyDeleteThanks everyone! I'm loving your comments!
ReplyDeleteIgnorance is bliss but wisdom is power. If only we could combine the two...
ReplyDeleteIndeed! We could call it Ignordom! ... Or Wisorance
DeleteI like a woman who knows her own mind and rejects those people and things that would enslave it. :)
ReplyDeleteThank you! You're far too kind! You were talking about me... right? ;)
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