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Friday, June 28, 2013

Five Sentence Fiction Friday - View

It's Friday! And not just any Friday, it's a long weekend Friday. (At least here in Canada it is.) Aren't those so much sweeter? And what better way to kick it off than with some Five Sentence Fiction? This week's prompt is view. If you'd like to learn more about Five Sentence Fiction, just visit Lillie McFerrin Writes. Enjoy!

"How's the view?"
"Oh, just fine... just fine."
He was being flirtatious, she knew, but clearly he didn't realize he had a hickey on the left side of his buttocks, or he wouldn't be swaggering around naked with it in plain sight. 
'So much for true love,' she thought, dropping her purse by the couch. She went into the kitchen to look for something suitably sharp. 

There you have it! I hope you all have a wonderful weekend. If you liked this piece, then please share it! Whether it be facebook, twitter, it doesn't matter. And if you really liked it, follow this blog so you never have to miss another one; not to mention come find me on twitter @MelanieKCole. If you're still hankering for more Five Sentence Fiction, just check out the links below for previous ones.

Five Sentence Fiction Friday - Blades
Five Sentence Fiction Friday - Home
Five Sentence Fiction Friday - Oops
Five Sentence Fiction Friday - Desolate


  1. Oh, I like that! Right up my alley.
    Mine: http://kindredspirit23.wordpress.com/2013/06/28/fsf-five-sentence-fiction-62813-final-viewing/

  2. Oh my, you are always full of pointed little surprises like this!

  3. Uh, I think somebody's in trouble here...

  4. hehehe...nicely done. I can only hope she does the right thing! I really like this one! Well done, as usual.

    Barbara @ www.allmylivesnow.com

  5. Sounds like she's looking to cut things short...

    Good stuff!

  6. This is cheeky! I love it Melanie!!