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Friday, October 11, 2013

Five Sentence Fiction Friday - Enrapture

Welcome to Friday and this week's edition of Five Sentence Fiction. This week's prompt is enrapture. If you'd like to learn more about Five Sentence Fiction, or give it a try yourself, just visit Lillie McFerrin Writes. Enjoy!

When she sang, it moved him. His heart would thump harder against his chest even as his breath caught in his throat, his skin bubbling up with goosebumps as each hair stood on end. It was hard, watching her from so far away, but it wouldn't be for much longer.
Soon she would know who he was. Soon she would be his. 

Voila! I hope you enjoyed this tiny story, and if you did, then I hope you'll share it with friends. If you're still in the mood for more Five Sentence Fiction, just follow the links below for past editions. Don't forget to follow this blog and come find me on twitter @MelanieKCole. Have a great weekend!

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  1. Dark!! I love it!!!

  2. Great story for this prompt. Well done. My story: http://mcguffysreader.blogspot.com/2013/10/enraptured.html

  3. Suspenseful! Nice use of the prompt. Thanks for sharing!!

  4. Nice, sweet, charming, with a twist of alpha-male!

    Beautifuly done!

    1. Thank you! I love that, 'a twist of alpha-male'. That's awesome. :)