"There's no point in spending your life in the pursuit of something that's easy." - Alice Kuipers

Friday, October 25, 2013

Five Sentence Fiction Friday - Determination

Welcome to Friday and this week's edition of Five Sentence Fiction. This week's prompt is determination. If you'd like to learn more about Five Sentence Fiction, or give it a try yourself, just visit Lillie McFerrin Writes. Enjoy!

She sat in her car, waiting outside his building, like a cat for its mouse. Sooner or later, he'd have to come out, have to talk to her, acknowledge her existence. She knew if she could just talk to him, she could make him see they were meant for each other. He belonged to her. She would make him see that. 

Voila! Hope you enjoyed this week's story, and if you did, don't forget to check out past editions below. Have a great weekend everyone!

Five Sentence Fiction Friday - Malice
Five Sentence Fiction Friday - Enrapture
Five Sentence Fiction Friday - Celebration
Five Sentence Fiction Friday - Magnetic


  1. This could be the start of a horror story, a murder mystery, or a romance - perhaps other genres. Which way did you see it? Or will you write a "part II" to let us know?

    1. Definitely horror. This is not a healthy infatuation

  2. She's very close to being scary!

  3. I loved the determination you're trying to show for this woman in your flash for the only love interest she sees in her life. However, at the same time I also sense that she'd be unable to accept this guy's rejection, should that happen.

    Quite powerful.

    Would love to hear your comment on my endeavor for this week's prompt.