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Friday, September 28, 2012

Five Sentence Fiction Friday - Devotion

Welcome to Friday, a day worth celebrating if ever there was one. This week's prompt is devotion. If you'd like to find out more, or give Five Sentence Fiction a try, just visit Lillie McFerrin Writes. Okay, here we go!

She knew what he was thinking, from the way he arched his eyebrow at her. He didn't believe she could do it, love him that much. She'd show him. 
No one had ever thought her capable of anything, especially murder. But they didn't realize that no one gets between her and her man ... no one.

I hope you enjoyed this little foray into fiction, as it was fun to write. If you'd like to read more, just check out the links below to past weeks' editions of Five Sentence Fiction. I wish each and every one of you a wonderful weekend, and hopefully I'll see you back here on Monday. Happy Friday!

Five Sentence Fiction Friday - Zombies
Five Sentence Fiction Friday - Awkward
Five Sentence Fiction Friday - Memories
Five Sentence Fiction Friday - Faces


  1. Sneaky and twisted. Well done!


  2. There's devotion for you. :) Nice twist.

  3. Love it! Nice portrayal of someone who's completely obsessed.

  4. a bit beyond co-dependence! she is indeed obsessed....

  5. Oooh, intrigue! I like this twisted take on devotion, and I want more of the story!

  6. Heh heh, thanks everyone! I'm glad you enjoyed my twisted little tale. It's far more fun to be twisted than expected! :)

  7. bent devotion but devotion none the less. nicely done.

  8. How deliciously dark! Twisted devotion indeed...

  9. And yet another Match.com romance goes awry! ;) Fun take on the prompt, Melanie.