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Friday, September 27, 2013

Five Sentence Fiction Friday - Magnetic

Welcome to Friday and this week's edition of Five Sentence Fiction. This week's prompt is magnetic. If you'd like to learn more about Five Sentence Fiction, or give it a try yourself, just visit Lillie McFerrin Writes. Enjoy!

She shakes her head at her son's latest google search. He's been acting so strange lately, but of course he won't say what's going on.
"Mom, I told you to stay out of my room!" he screams it, eyes glinting as he scrambles across the room and slams his laptop closed. 
She's never seen him like this, so angry he's actually trembling; it's frightening. That's when she notices the coins on his desk begin to move...

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  1. Terrorific moment!

    There is no worse danger than a poltergeist kid!

    Nicely done. Good choice of words!

  2. Oh wow, interesting! I would like to see more of this story.

    1. Thank you! I might have to keep playing with this one...

  3. I've got to agree with Liam's poltergeist comment. The power has scared this kid so much that he doesn't want to scare his mother or to have her worry about what's happening.

  4. I LOVE this! I will definitely have to go check out your other five sentence stories. What an ingenious idea!

    Nicole @ Feed Your Fiction Addiction

    1. Thank you so much! You should try it as well, I'd love to read your take!